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Old 08-04-2011, 02:05 PM
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So, this image is from a wedding I did back in October. But I was looking through the images, and I never touched this one up.
So I'm asking the stereo typical question " what do you think"
as well as, do you think it should be sharpened on the sides and top, or just left as it is?
The frame and rocks around the window are slightly more out of focus in this shot because i really wanted the attention on the bride and groom. =/

Camera: Canon EOS Rebel XSi
Lens: 55mm
ISo: 1600
Focal Length: 18mm
Exposure Compensation: + 1/3
Apature: f/5.0
flash: Off
Shutter Speed: 1/500
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Old 08-05-2011, 01:01 AM
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A better than average concept. I think the whole thing needs to be brightened a little.. at worst you'll blow out the background behind the couple, but its no great loss. Worry less about your sharpening and more about the overall tone and lighting.
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Old 08-05-2011, 05:50 PM
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Definitely like the concept... except, one of the window panes dissects the main in half and throws off the photo.
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Old 08-06-2011, 07:53 AM
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So, this image is from a wedding I did back in October. But I was looking through the images, and I never touched this one up.
So I'm asking the stereo typical question " what do you think"
as well as, do you think it should be sharpened on the sides and top, or just left as it is?
The frame and rocks around the window are slightly more out of focus in this shot because i really wanted the attention on the bride and groom. =/

Camera: Canon EOS Rebel XSi
Lens: 55mm
ISo: 1600
Focal Length: 18mm
Exposure Compensation: + 1/3
Apature: f/5.0
flash: Off
Shutter Speed: 1/500
I never shot through a window of people subjects cause it takes away a ton of sharpness of the subjects. But I would if possible soften rocks with a lower aperture. As for technique I do see some issues with the high ISO/shutter, they could be shutter 1/60th and ISO 100-300. For comp. it looks okay...
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