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I'd recommend using the even frontal light as a fill (down about 1 - 2 stops) and a hard-ish key raking across your face to reveal shape. It should pick up more of the "character".
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I'm ok with the lighting. Except for one bit I will mention below.
It appears, however, that the lighting (probably from the background) has bounced back onto your lens, creating a bit of washout. The contrast is less than it can be. To see what I mean, open this in PS, create a Levels layer (I'm not a fan of Levels, just trying to illustrate my point), click on the black dropper, then click on your black shirt. That's contrast! And I think it makes the pic look much better. The only thing I don't like about the lighting is the bright spot under your Adam's apple. It is the highest contrast spot on your portrait, and so it competes with your eyes for attention. This could probably be darkened in post. |
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Obviously I'm not an expert, but it looks reallly good to me. I think you could up the black levels a tad bit, but otherwise the lighting looks very nice. If I can think of one negative, there seems to be more white space on the left than on the right.
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Thanks guys. Looking at it this morning, I have too much fill from below. I might try it again dialed down, or going with the front fill idea. I think a little bit of shadow under the eye brows and chin might be better.
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Again, I'm no pro, but personally I think you've got a promising shot here, and I actually like it. I do agree it needs a tad bit more contrast in my opinion, so I did some light dodging/burning here and there and a slight contrast bump. I hope you don't mind. I think this may be what ttosifa was talking about as well? What do you think?
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If you want to go THAT detailed, what about something like this? I hope Scott doesn't get mad for us playing...
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