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I just wanna know about composition, I was standing in this situation. There is no crop done or should I crop?



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Exposure 0.005 sec (1/200)
Aperture f/3.5
Focal Length 20 mm
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Old 08-02-2011, 04:25 PM
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The idea is coool, and I like the green, but there's a green cast on the girl.
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Old 08-02-2011, 05:00 PM
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I tried a square crop as I thought it would work better...it doesn't.
I agree with removing the green cast from the child.
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Old 08-03-2011, 06:57 AM
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I would've tried a lower speed, and a higher ISO, so maybe the girl's face would have a chance of being seen. (of course, the speedlite would solve this, but maybe you don't have one)
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