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Old 07-25-2011, 02:47 AM
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Looking for critique on my lighting mainlight on camera left at f/8, fill on cam left at f/5.6 2:1 ratio. Had softboxes on flashes, feathered main to left and fill to right.
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Old 07-25-2011, 05:38 AM
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you're lightning looks fine and I like the catchlight in her eyes.
since that's the only question.. I'll spare you the full critique
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Old 07-25-2011, 10:35 AM
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you're lightning looks fine and I like the catchlight in her eyes.
since that's the only question.. I'll spare you the full critique
+1.... just to add, and although not solicited, if you moved your subject further from the background, it would create better separation and blur the wrinkles out of the muslin.
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Old 07-26-2011, 01:51 AM
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Mr. Jones if you see this reply I would like to hear the full critique, can't learn if I don't revcieve constructive feedback.
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