17 year old photographer looking for good critique.

[Carsten]

Hello, I was really hoping to get some critique one some of my portraiture work.

Thank you in advance,
Jonathan





Kira by jonathanschertzer, on Flickr


Nikon D200
Exposure 0.1 sec (1/10)
Aperture f/18.0

[IABoomer]

My advice would be to read the sticky rules post: Critique Forum Rules then edit your above post accordingly.

[Niresangwa]

Hey Carsten.. pick one shot, include the Exif and ask a question, and I'm sure people will be happy to critique.

To do a proper job which can take 5-15 minutes of typing, it's not all that reasonable to expect us to have to do it for all of your shots, and go hunting on Flickr for your Exif.

[TheMoons678]

Hey welcome to DPS! I see youve already changed your post and it looks great! Fun idea, i like the depth of field. Some fill flash would have been nice but I like the shot.

[JFSanders]

Great idea, just need to work on getting your subject sharp especially the eyes. You need a little fill flash to lighten the eyes as well. There are a few good cropping choices that would make for different perspectives and bring her to the fore. Unless the environment is your subject in which case this is pretty good.

Jim

[cmount]

great shot. the subject could be slightly sharper, however i really like the colors and the lighting of this shot.

[kristoferjohn]

Fabulous picture,i like your artwork,you give quite good effect,lighting is amazing.you also looking gorgeous in this pose.I must say that you nice photographer.