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Old 07-08-2011, 12:48 AM
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Hello everyone. I'm new here and would really like to improve my photography, but think I need some critique to help get me there where I would like to be with photography.


On the Concord Minuteman Trail by US Army SGT, on Flickr

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EXIF Information:
Camera: Nikon D3100
Exposure Time: 0.005 second (1/200)
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Aperture: f/5.6
Focal Length: 55 mm
ISO Speed: 64
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
White Balance: Auto
Exposure Mode: Auto
X-Resolution: 300 dpi
Y-Resolution: 300 dpi
Orientation: Unknown
Post Processing Software: Corel PaintShop Photo Pro X3 (13.00)
Exposure Program: Normal program P
Date and Time: (Original) 2011:06:04 17:01:43
Date and Time: (Modified) 2011:07:07 20:37:37

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Old 07-08-2011, 01:40 AM
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Looks pretty good as is but the exposure is just a tad off giving a slight green cast. Probably due to the camera trying to pick the right White Balance.

I set a warmer WB and a slight levels adjustment in the midtones to bring out the details in her face and lower the exposure a tad. Then ran a high pass filter to gain sharpness in her eyes.

What do you think?

Jim
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