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Old 07-04-2011, 08:37 AM
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Hi,

This is my first portrait. Please let me know what are the ways to improve the shot.

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Old 07-04-2011, 09:45 AM
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She is a cutie...

Under the rules for critique, you need to post your exif data so we can help you. Your exif data shows:

Camera Canon EOS 1000D
Exposure 0.008 sec (1/125)
Aperture f/9.0
Focal Length 55 mm
ISO Speed 200

Now that I know that, I can tell you the background is distracting, and if you were to have shot with a smaller aperture (which in your lenses case is f/5.6) you could have blurred, defocused, or bokehed the background some and made it less distracting.

Focus & white balance seem pretty good. I would not have had her centered in the frame, and would probably crop the image on the left just behind her ear.
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Old 07-04-2011, 11:12 AM
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Thanx a lot Scott. It is really helpful. Next time I'll keep the Aperture concept in mind.
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