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Old 06-20-2011, 04:57 PM
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This is a picture of a couple sharing a moment on the dance floor

what are your thoughts on ths one guys?

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Old 06-20-2011, 06:14 PM
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As per the forum expectations, please post your EXIF data. Also, it helps if you can post an image from Flickr directly onto your post, rather than just creating a link to it. People are more likely to respond if they don't have to switch back and forth between DPS Forums and Flickr.
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Old 06-20-2011, 07:50 PM
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This is a picture of a couple sharing a moment on the dance floor

what are your thoughts on ths one guys?

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I loved your photo--the lighting, the moment.
Easy issue--it would help me in viewing if you edited out the white light of someone else's flash in the background. My eyes are drawn to the light, and taken away from the couple.
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I loved your photo--the lighting, the moment.
Easy issue--it would help me in viewing if you edited out the white light of someone else's flash in the background. My eyes are drawn to the light, and taken away from the couple.
I agree.
try darkening the people in the background and cloning out that white spot.
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Great pic that really captures their closeness.

I do think there is too much dead space above them though and a tighter crop would make this an even better picture.
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