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[miraroadvolfire]

I have two pictures here of a freind of mine that is sick and these pictures mean alot to him and his family. Can someone take a look and see what you think and if there is anything you want to do to make them look better please feel free to do so.

They were shot with a nikon d5000 in Atuo.
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Thanks
Art

[Bruce A]

I prefer the one with the flag showing on his shoulder - and I think he and his family will be pleased and grateful with the shot regardless of what critiques you may receive. I hope your friend recovers.

[windrider86]

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[miraroadvolfire]

Pic 1
Nikon d5000
f-stop - 4.2
Ex - 1/30sec
ISO - 1100
Focal L - 68mm
Max Ap - 4.1
Meter mode - pattern
Flash - no
35mm focal length - 102

Pic 2

Nikon d5000
f-stop - 4.2
Ex - 1/30sec
ISO - 1250
Focal L - 65mm
Max Ap - 4.1
Meter mode - pattern
Flash - no
35mm focal length - 197

Is this what you mean.

Thanks