My Lovely-awesome-cool Stepsister

[AlyBear]

What do ya think?

[SusanH1970]

Originally Posted by AlyBear

What do ya think?

This is what I think: Critique Forum Rules

[JFSanders]

She is beautiful! I think that using the board as a gobo was a good idea or a bit of luck. Now her hair highlights are blown but you could have fixed that with a diffuser panel off camera or by waiting until the light was a bit less bright. Also her eyes are soft which can be a positive or a negative depending on what you were going for.

Jim

P.S. the rules for the forum were posted so I won't hammer you on them other than to say that they help to keep the forum becoming chaotic.

[edbayani]

aside from the forum rules., i think as JFS says the hair is blown out and the hair that partially covers her eye is bothersome. also it is too warm. maybe a little desaturation is needed..