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Old 05-30-2011, 04:24 AM
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We were doing a fun photo shoot and I was wanting to see if this was ok? Thanks for looking

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Old 05-30-2011, 04:30 AM
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so sorry I put the image up too small....
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I like it. its good but i think i would just have her eyes above the water or her whole head, cutting off the chin just looks funny somehow :P
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Old 05-30-2011, 10:40 PM
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I like it. its good but i think i would just have her eyes above the water or her whole head, cutting off the chin just looks funny somehow :P
I agree. Also, she seems to be leaning forward into the water. If she was sitting or standing with her shoulders square it would have made for a nicer pose as well as not cutting off her chin. I like the idea of the waterline just below her eyes. Nice shot though!
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Old 05-31-2011, 01:25 AM
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I agree about the water line but she just had a tattoo done on the back of her neck and she wouldn't go any lower Thanks for the critique
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