We don't need to be sisters to be... sisters.

[ah_u3]

Hi DPS, I wish you're all fine and shooting.

This is one of my first, if not my first, serious attempts at portraits, I took this at a festival in my hometown with a Sigma 70-200mm f2.8 of a friend of mine which I was trying out cause i was planning on buying it from him...

I would pretty much appreciate all feedback, especially concerning framing and monochrome conversion, among any our thing that you think might help me, thank you !

We don't have to be sisters to be... sisters. | Flickr - Photo Sharing!

[sheila3]

I think it is a beautiful picture. Like the conversion. Composition is good. Only thing I can see and this is way nitpicky is that it would have been nice if girls hair wasn't falling towards her mouth. But really nice shot!

[justin_ing]

I feel like its a little tight on the composition... but its a nice candid photo for sure

[ajsuk]

I like it. Composition is tight, but for me that just insinuates closeness which actually adds to the point of the shot. =)

[ah_u3]

Thanks alot everybody, I really appreciate your help

[BigFuzzy]

Yeah, the image feels a bit tightly cropped for my tastes as well. I would have liked to see more space below the chin of the girl on the left and a bit more space to the right of the girl on the right.
I like the idea of making this b&w, but some of the skin feels a bit blown out to me. Maybe you want this "high key" look, which I get, but i think you can achieve it and still have it be a bit less blown out.
In the end, it's a nice happy candid shot which I'm sure they'll be happy with.