First Couple Shoot

[Roboflame]

Hi,



Could you kind suggest which areas should I change to great photo?
-White Balance
-Vignetting
-focus
-composition

Shoot with 50mm f/1.8

Shutter Speed: 1/400 s, Aperture f/2 , ISO 200

Thank You for your viewing!

[justin_ing]

you need to post EXIF data

but immediately, i would get rid of the vignetting... its too much. Same with the vibrance or saturation. The background is more vibrant than your subjects

[MrJones]

Justin is right. the vignetting is WAY WAY too much and it is over saturated.
other than that, you cut off his fingertips and the photo should be straightened (look at the pole lines)

[Mark Engelhart]

As far as the composition of the image, there is alot going on behind them. Lots of different tones and colors etc. Each of the contrasts, etc. have a tendency to pull your eye away from what it should be looking at, which is the subject(s). Best bet is to find areas that don't have much going on behind the subject even if it is a boring woods or field.

[justin_ing]

For the composition, her pose isn't the best for her. I would have turned her more of a 45. His pose is too relaxed. It doesn't look like they "like" each other.

[Roboflame]

Originally Posted by justin_ing

you need to post EXIF data

but immediately, i would get rid of the vignetting... its too much. Same with the vibrance or saturation. The background is more vibrant than your subjects

Thank you Justin. I will try to avoid the things u said next time.

Originally Posted by MrJones

Justin is right. the vignetting is WAY WAY too much and it is over saturated.
other than that, you cut off his fingertips and the photo should be straightened (look at the pole lines)

Thank you MrJones. I also feel that way but don't know how to correct.

Originally Posted by Mark Engelhart

As far as the composition of the image, there is alot going on behind them. Lots of different tones and colors etc. Each of the contrasts, etc. have a tendency to pull your eye away from what it should be looking at, which is the subject(s). Best bet is to find areas that don't have much going on behind the subject even if it is a boring woods or field.

Thank You Mark. I didn't aware that. I took the shot and review I thought it fine.
Next time, I will take a look at those things.

Originally Posted by justin_ing

For the composition, her pose isn't the best for her. I would have turned her more of a 45. His pose is too relaxed. It doesn't look like they "like" each other.

I also don't know how to say to pose. Sometime, I shy to told to pose. lol
Thank you for point me out.

I wish I can learn from all of you guys