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Old 05-05-2011, 03:50 PM
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Old 05-05-2011, 04:01 PM
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very nice but you might want to go through the critique forum rules.
I love the BW photo!
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They are very nice. But I think this needs to be in the SYS section, not the Critique.
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Default Blown out Highlights

You have a good eye and the images are good but I think you have some exposure control issues (which I know are difficult on location and a wedding at that!) the highlight areas are blown out. One image it looks like there are two different color tempertures, one on each side of her face, that is disturbing--but correctable.

I retired from weddings because of challenges like this! Fill flash would help.
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For #1, I would have drawn the closest shoulder down a bit and probably not so close to the wall. It kinda distracts from her face since this angle makes it larger than her face.

#2, stunning

#3, drop the exposure a little but love the concept. I would have had her smile behind the flowers since it would show the glimpse of a smile in her eyes.

#4, I think this is a great pic but I think it would have been cool if she was looking to the right instead of down
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