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Old 04-27-2011, 11:32 PM
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This is a set o pics that i take of my daughter , y will love your comments to help me improve my pics..

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Ps: I am a little new to dslr photography..

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Old 04-28-2011, 04:00 AM
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Old 04-28-2011, 07:33 AM
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Okay there are four pics, maybe the moderator will remove the others, so picture 1 to 3, you edit it with selective colors and for me it does'nt fit, the selective coloring of the flowers especially in pic 2 is a distraction, because you lead the eye of the viewer to something blurred and out of focus, better to have some exercises on framing because I noticed some negative spaces on your composition which is not necessary, and to the picture 4, I think you are trying to produce a low key image but the light falls on the stuffed toy instead of your daughter's face (unless you are highlighting her toy), so that's for now and this is just my opinions, I hope it helps.
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Old 04-28-2011, 12:30 PM
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Welcome!!!
In order for us to help you, we need a bit more information. What you need to know can be found here.
Camera settings (exif) plays a big part in helping you. If we knew what you shot with we could offer you alternate settings that might enhance your photo. Also knowing what you like or dont like can give us a sense of direction to help you further. Thank you!!!
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