In shower

[locography]

Hi,

This is a self-portait that I took recently. I dont really do them, but decided to go ahead n shoot myself.

Could you please comment on the composition, exposure, framing and the editing?

The focus is not right and I am aware of that..It dont matter to me at the moment.. I am gonna get the focus right next time..

Also if there is anything you think is wrong with this photo, please let me know.




EXIF:

ISO 100
Shutter Speed : 1 sec
Aperture : f/2.5
Camera: Canon 550d
Lens :Canon 50mm f/1.8 II
Exposure : Manual
White Balance : Tungsten

Thanks,

Locography

[gturner]

neat idea
you are too far off to the left though, if you are going to go for the direct stare look, you might as well place yourself square in the middle of the frame. square off your shoulders to create symmetry with your square jaw.

Focus is important because it will help decide whether the slow shutter that gives the water effect works or not.

The image looks a little blue/ cool on my calibrated screen. Not sure if that is deliberate, but you may want to warm it up a touch.