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I would love some critique of this photo. I have a new Nikon D3100 and although I was pleased with the results, I found the focus just a little soft. I tweaked this photos only slighly in photoshop to remove some acne off my daughter's face. The rest is as shot. There are a couple of other shots from this session in my flickr photostream here Flickr: ARWildflower's Photostream if you'd like to review them. Thoughts?
![]() Exif data Camera Nikon D3100 Exposure 0.006 sec (1/160) Aperture f/9.0 Focal Length 55 mm ISO Speed 1600 Exposure Bias 0 EV
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Not liking the pose here, I would have had her turn her body slightly to her left and lean against the doorway on her right. Then I would have cropped tighter and removed some of the excess surrounding area, leaving her more to the left of the photo. The stone wall is more distracting than interesting.
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Hmm, ok, fair comment. I liked the contrast of the stone to the dark wood, but I see your point of it being a distraction. I did have a few with her posing more as you describe, but my slight focus issues made them not to my satisfaction. Thank you for looking, critiquing and commenting. I appreciate your time.
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Thanks, Luke. I'm new enough to PS to not be too good with curves yet, but am learning. Hazy is a good word, and I'll play with contrast some to see if I can resolve that. The slightly blue cast is also noted. Thanks for your comments.
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I'm not really seeing any focus issues either. Heck, I've seen hazier looking pictures from a professional family portrait studio (though they always seem to go for that "romantic" look.).
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