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Try it again........Critique this shot or make changes...I do have the raw file
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Old 04-18-2011, 02:07 AM
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Default hope it works this time
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Old 04-18-2011, 03:31 AM
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The focus is off. The crop is too tight.
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Old 04-18-2011, 08:15 PM
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The focus is off. The crop is too tight.
Yep, it is.
Can you post the exif please.


The image is also flat. You need to lift the colour and tone to give him a babies glow.
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