How Is My Composition

[mral]

hi
I want to know how is my composition and the exposure doing.is it okay or not?
and it's a first time I using flashgun.thank you


Nikon D5000
Focal Length: 24 mm
ISO: 500
Aperture: f/7.1
Shutter: 1/200

[Bruce A]

Composition is not bad, but it's a little overexposed with the sky blowing out a little. Also it could do with some lens distortion tweaking and straightening. I'd also like to see the handsome couple a bit closer to the camera.

[ryan_s]

nice angle.. and good composition..
somewhat i'm 50/50 on the background..
i like the trees on the left... but the trees on the right are off to me, maybe it's the small space between both of u and on the border just..

and was just mentioned the blow-out sky... maybe that's the reason why u look like Superman at my 1st glance.. down w/ ur cape saving this sweet girl

[docxnoel]

I like how the blue colors pop in your photo. ISO 500 is too high and I think this cause to blown out the sky and overexposed, 24mm focal lenght at f7.1 focuses everything on the screen which makes your photo so busy, trees and even the groom is leaning, you use rule of third overly and causes to much negative space. If I am going to shot this image, I willl set my ISO as 100, having a tight framing emphasizing the couple, and I do not cropped the husband hands (maybe I instruct him to hold the girl on her waistline to shows more intimacy)