Daughter enjoying the spring

[MelissaP]

I used my Canon Power shot SX130 IS its in a PNG format.

I posted a photo a few days ago and I wanted to see if I have improved with any of the critique I got before?

[Photologyst]

Where to start without causing offense?

The photo on my monitor looks dark rather than spring like; the skin is mottled; the angle is not flattering to the child; the blanket looks nasty while the whole thing seems out of focus.

What is the focal point here?

Next time, perhaps try to focus on her eyes; get her to look at something so that those eyes shine.