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Old 03-29-2011, 01:49 AM
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Hey everyone! Was playing with my pictures. Thought this one of my daughter was a good candidate for B&W. Just wondering about the conversion. Is there enough B&W or still just grays? And also I've seen people call their B&W conversions muddy. What does that mean? Any other input welcome! Thanx so much!


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Hi Sheila, nice picture
your B&W conversion still lacks a bit of contrast and it still doesn't have true whites in it.
I've edited it (hope you don't mind) to show you what I mean, of course in the end it's a matter of taste.
and when people say muddy, they mean exactly what you've asked - is it just grays?

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What software package do you use?
I've recently discovered SilverEfex as an addon to Photoshop and Lightroom.
Fantastic b&W results. really makes them 'pop'
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Old 03-30-2011, 02:28 AM
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Hi Sheila, nice picture
your B&W conversion still lacks a bit of contrast and it still doesn't have true whites in it.
I've edited it (hope you don't mind) to show you what I mean, of course in the end it's a matter of taste.
and when people say muddy, they mean exactly what you've asked - is it just grays?

Thanx Mr. Jones! I like the edit. I definately see the difference
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What software package do you use?
I've recently discovered SilverEfex as an addon to Photoshop and Lightroom.
Fantastic b&W results. really makes them 'pop'
I use photoshop. I will have to check out silverefex. thanx for tip
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Sheila, would you mind posting a color version for a play? Preferably a SOOC, if you have it.
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Old 03-30-2011, 03:15 AM
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Well upped the contrast a bit...better? I've been staring at it so long I can't tell anymore

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Sheila, would you mind posting a color version for a play? Preferably a SOOC, if you have it.
Sure...here ya go...

IMG_9540_edited-4

Looking forward to your edit Thanx for helping.
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Old 03-30-2011, 04:13 AM
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Hopefully you don't mind me editing this, but seeing as though Susan requested the sooc, I couldnt resist, given how great a shot it is...

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Simply my standard b&w high contrast action, touched up with levels (better option than contrast I find, as it gives more control)...

...to give it a little depth, consider using the colour balance adjustment.. slightly boost the shadows (cyan & blue) slightly boost the highlights (red and yellow) by about +/-7 in their respective directions and either leave the midtones, or move them towards red & yellow to warm it, or blues to slightly cool it.

The use of tiny variations using the colour balance really made a difference for me in my B&W's which I use about 50/50 with colour images.

Overall though, I really like this shot. The framing is just wonderful.

fyi I didn't punch up the whites of the eyes or the catchlights (which are exquisite)... they were great just as they were.
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Old 03-30-2011, 12:34 PM
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Hi Sheila! Thanks for posting a SOOC and letting me have a play.

The white balance was quite a bit off, so I opened in ACR and slid the temperature slider towards blue to cool it down. I also bumped the exposure a tiny bit and I added a touch of contrast in ACR as well.

In CS2, I used the patch tool under her eyes and faded to about 60-65%. It was still lacking a bit of contrast, so I did a soft light layer at around 70% to give the background some punch, and masked her back in.

For the BW conversion, I just did my usual gradient map, then did a levels adjustment layer to brighten the midtones and darken the blacks just a touch.

Hope you like it.!

Your SOOC:
sheila sooc

Color edit:
sheila color edit web

BW Conversion:
sheila bw edit web
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