Girlfriend Portrait- Redone

[Greendrake77]

Too much post processing? What do you think about the colors and clarity? I know the lighting wasn't the best here but i just got lightroom and am trying to see what i can get away with.
Thanks


Exposure 0.013 sec (1/80)
Aperture f/5.0
Focal Length 70 mm
ISO Speed 100

[MrJones]

I think it's really nice and look natural. didn't notice any PP work..

[gjakovare]

I think color and clarity are good here. Don't notice too much of PP done, so that's a good thing. I think you've nailed the technical aspects here