Pretty Face IV

[locojain]

Hey guys,

Back to the pretty face series.

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Please review this shot and give your opinion about it. Any suggestion would be really helpful.

Please comment on
1. Composition
2. Framing
3. Exposure
4. Editing / colors
5. Angle of shot
6. Focus.



Exif

Camera Canon EOS 550D
Exposure 0.001 sec (1/1000)
Aperture f/1.8
Focal Length 50 mm
ISO Speed 100
Exposure Bias 0 EV
Flash Off, Did not fire

Thanks

[MrJones]

I feel it is a bit underexposed and you've got a bit of red color cast.
you can fix those with levels on photoshop (or any other PP software).
I think the focus is OK, hard to tell at this size.
as for the pose, she doesn't seem to be comfortable with it. is she lying? climbing?
another thing, I would have removed those marks from her left arm (right next to the elbow).

in this shot she seems much more comfortable and less muscles are involved, giving her a softer look.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/locojain/5549473879/

it's not a bad shot, there is just always room for improvement

[locojain]

Originally Posted by MrJones

I feel it is a bit underexposed and you've got a bit of red color cast.
you can fix those with levels on photoshop (or any other PP software).
I think the focus is OK, hard to tell at this size.
as for the pose, she doesn't seem to be comfortable with it. is she lying? climbing?
another thing, I would have removed those marks from her left arm (right next to the elbow).

in this shot she seems much more comfortable and less muscles are involved, giving her a softer look.
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it's not a bad shot, there is just always room for improvement

Thanks a lot mr Jones.. I like your honesty.. Thanks.. I actually did not notice those marks on her arms .. those were caused by the channel she was lyin on..
I might check the exposure.. i think i edited it when my LCD was dimmed..

[EOBeav]

I'm not much of a portrait guy, but she does look strained and not comfortable at all in that pose.

[sk66]

1. Composition
Not ideal
2. Framing
See above
3. Exposure
Underexposed
4. Editing / colors
Could use some more editing and WB is off.
5. Angle of shot
I'm ok with this
6. Focus.
Looks ok to me

See if you can tell what I did.

[locojain]

Thanks a lot everyone.. Got what i wanted..this isnt a very good pic for sure.. was experimenting on colors in lightroom, turned out that this one doesnt suit the portraits.. or maybe look underexposed.. gonna fix it.. n yea i realised after the first comment that this isnt the pic i wanted to upload..but nevertheless, got a lot of info about stuff.

Thanks