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[locojain]

Hi,

I would like you to review this photo which i took recently.. I would appreciate it if you could give me some detailed review/comments..

Comments on the following attributes required.

1. Composition - Is it well composed?
2. Framing - Is the framing good? Is there any way i could have improved it?
3. Exposure - Well exposed or poorly exposed
4. Editing - I preferred B/W over any other alternative coz it creates a mood in the pic.. was it a good idea? could i have done better?
5 Focus..

If there is anything else you would want to comment on then please feel free.. i dont bite :P

It is a street portrait.

Thanks




EXIF :
Camera Canon EOS 550D
Exposure 0.001 sec (1/1600)
Aperture f/1.8
Focal Length 50 mm
ISO Speed 100
Exposure Bias 0 EV

[autofocus]

The biggest problem I have is with the heavy vignette...it totally blacked out his hands..it's almost a bad as cropping at the wrists.

[ctcook]

Originally Posted by autofocus

The biggest problem I have is with the heavy vignette...it totally blacked out his hands..it's almost a bad as cropping at the wrists.

I agree with the vignette.

1. Composition - Good
2. Framing - Part of left hand is not in frame.
3. Exposure - The subject is exposed well, but maybe a littel underexposed.
4. Editing - I like the B/W. This might be a good example where less contrast is better for a B/W.
5 Focus - Looks good on my tiny laptop screen.

Overall good capture, thanks for posting.

[locojain]

Thanks a lot guys.. will fix the vignette...