Portrait of my girlfriend

[andrewhaimerl]

I took this photo of my girlfriend last week and then tried to do some touch ups in photoshop to make it look nicer. I've posted before and after pictures. I mostly did airbrushing and a few other minor adjustments. I'd appreciate any comments, critique, or ways I can make it look better. Thanks

Well for some reason the original won't post so I just have the final product up.

[MrJones]

I only see the after picture.
anyway, I think you did a good job in PP, except for the teeth part which are whiter than any teeth I've seen, including magazine and even toothpaste shots!