What’s Your Preference?

lotteotte · #1 (**permalink**) 03-05-2011, 09:43 PM

These are two photos I took some time ago of my daughter. I used to like this first photo, although I was never sure about the scarf over her face.

After some discussions on DPS now I wonder if this second one is actually the more interesting picture. I really like the look on her face, she seems to be daydreaming and relaxing. Which one do you like more?

I also would appreciate some thoughts on the colors. So far I have done only minimal PP - and clearly I must have made the colors on the first one more vibrant. I am just starting to work with Lightroom (I am actually still on the free trial). On the bottom one I should also get rid of the triangle on the right side, but don't want to crop it since it cuts too much into the ugly doll. I am sure I can photoshop it out, but don't yet know how to do it. And after some input from DPS people I guess I also should take care of the wrinkles on the couch.....oh mei....so much to learn.

ctcook · #2 (**permalink**) 03-05-2011, 10:46 PM

They're both good, but if I had to pick I'd go with number 1. Her eyes are very engaging and I like the scarf. It appears to be a tad underexposed (on my laptop anyway). Also the orange bird doll is distracting and pulls my attention away from your daughter.

The second one has better exposure and I agree that it has a more "daydreamy" feeling. Again, the orange bird needs to go. The "triangle" in the top right corner should be corrected, but I could live with the wrinkles.

I won't comment on the color because my laptop isn't calobrated and I know that the colors on it are off.

Overal they're both good shots thanks for sharing.

LeeR · #3 (**permalink**) 03-06-2011, 02:07 AM

From a compositional standpoint, the first is clearly the stronger image; but also it has a much stronger emotional quality. It is hard not to feel the undercurrents of both the innocence of childhood and the allure maturity, a hallmark of this age. I have a feeling that in time this will become a treasured possession.

RichardTaylor · #4 (**permalink**) 03-06-2011, 02:47 AM

Both good, however #1 is my fave.

sheila3 · #5 (**permalink**) 03-06-2011, 03:32 AM

I have to agree with all above. #1 is my favorite. I like the scarf and the look in her eyes.

sk66 · #6 (**permalink**) 03-06-2011, 03:40 AM

I think #1 is definitely the stronger image, primarily due to the eye contact. That said, I think it wold be even better if cropped tighter......around the lower elbow and the orange pterodactyl (or whatever it is)...

lotteotte · #7 (**permalink**) 03-06-2011, 07:17 AM

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Originally Posted by ctcook

They're both good, but if I had to pick I'd go with number 1. Her eyes are very engaging and I like the scarf. It appears to be a tad underexposed (on my laptop anyway). Also the orange bird doll is distracting and pulls my attention away from your daughter.

The second one has better exposure and I agree that it has a more "daydreamy" feeling. Again, the orange bird needs to go. The "triangle" in the top right corner should be corrected, but I could live with the wrinkles.

I won't comment on the color because my laptop isn't calobrated and I know that the colors on it are off.

Overal they're both good shots thanks for sharing.

This is great feedback, thanks so much. I love the orange bird, but I get your point - it seems a radical idea for me to remove it, but it's certainly an option that never dawned on me. Again - thanks a lot!!

lotteotte · #8 (**permalink**) 03-06-2011, 07:20 AM

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Originally Posted by LeeR

From a compositional standpoint, the first is clearly the stronger image; but also it has a much stronger emotional quality. It is hard not to feel the undercurrents of both the innocence of childhood and the allure maturity, a hallmark of this age. I have a feeling that in time this will become a treasured possession.

Thanks a lot Lee! Your comment goes way beyond technical advise, I can't even find the words for what it is, but I very much enjoy it.