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I was in the city over the weekend, attempting to shoot a dog show, (wow that was a sobering experience) While there, found a great little spot, with the city in the background and thought I'd try a couple Portrait's. Grabbed my willing victim and shot a few. Weather was cloudy, overcast and cold, snow/rain as well
Looking for input on over all composition on this one, as well as lighting. I shot it with flash for fill. 1/200 iso 100 f/8 Shot in sports mode cause I am a moron at times Thanks for looking and the feedback. ![]() DSC_0558 by Thezaphod042, on Flickr There are more on my flickr site as well..
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I like composition with the cityscape in the BG and blurred just enough so it is not distracting but to me it seems to be a little underexposed and that can be bumped up in PP. Don't take what I say as gospel because I am pretty much a newb.
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It's definitely underexposed, and I'd clone out the buildings growing out of her head.
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Thank you for the response, I will bump the exp. a tad and try to clone out the buildings, never have been very good at that but guess its time to practice
There is also this one that I did bump the exp already, still have a small building over her head though.. DSC_0566 | Flickr - Photo Sharing!
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I'd also brighten them both up and remove the buildings coming out of her head in each one.
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Anyone have a link to any good tutorials on cloning out bg in cs5?
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Don't have a link, but your best bet is to zoom way, WAY in and do it in small patches, resampling as needed. If you'd like me to have a play, let me know.
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Attempt to retouch..
![]() 5484217456_de7538473d_b by Thezaphod042, on Flickr Bumped the exp 1.5 stops, increased the contrast and did my best to clone out the buildings..
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