a right charlie

[gunners67]

Hi looking for critique on the exposure and sharpness of this pic quite happy with composition (i think) not sure sure about exposure of the skin and wether it works any other coments most welcome and encouraged



0.008 sec (1/125)
Aperture f/11.0
Focal Length 70 mm
ISO Speed 100
cheap studio light and homemade softbox above and right of camera

[mcklynna]

Her face is a bit overexposed for my taste. And I think it would have looked better if she wasn't angled as much.

[Crabs]

Originally Posted by mcklynna

Her face is a bit overexposed for my taste. And I think it would have looked better if she wasn't angled as much.

I think this is true, I think just if her nose wasnt cutting through her left eye it would have been a touch better..

It looks like a genuine smile thought!

[gunners67]

Thanks for your coments i agree that her skin looks a bit washed out and the angle could have been better