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Old 01-09-2011, 03:27 PM
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Default Winter Shots with Summer

I recently did a portrait shoot that was a Winter Styled portrait shoot so I thought I would post and find out what people thought.

I am looking for feedback on: Lighting, Pose, Creativity, Editing, etc...
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Aperture: f/1.4Focal length: 50 mm
ISO: 200
Shutter speed: 1/250 s

Model: Summer McGrath
Makeup/Hair: Megan Bach

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Old 01-09-2011, 04:40 PM
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Very pretty model. The MUA did great.

The lighting is great. The pose is nice but it almost looks like her head is just floating in space. I guess there isn't enoug of her body in it to show the head is attached to it. Maybe a higher f/stop and/or more of the model's shoulders would fix that floating head perception.

Overall it's a great collaboration between model, MUA and photographer.
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Old 01-09-2011, 07:28 PM
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Gorgeous girl.

Personally my first instinct was to want to drag the image to the right a bit (screen right). It somehow feels a bit squashed. This is of course very subjective.

Love the necklace, lashes and white makeup. Actually I like all the makeup - she is gorgeous but if you are wanting ideas for the future, she looks very tanned for winter.

Can't help with any of the photo stuff
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Old 01-11-2011, 12:15 AM
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Love the makeup and look of the model!
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Old 01-11-2011, 04:13 AM
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Liking this shot! can you post some lighting info? i saw 3 catchlight... the upper left might be an umbrella/softbox for main... center might be for fill or is it commander mode... but i can't figure out what the lower right might be for? it's very much muted compared to the other two...
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