Senior Portrait Shot

[KellieLass]

What you think of this shot?

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From Emily Jacob SHOOT

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ISO: 100
Exposure: 1/50 sec
Aperture: 5.6
Focal Length: 32mm
Flash Used: No

[kristenh]

it's a cute pose and she's a pretty girl, but i personally don't like the way its lit. there are funny shadows on her nose and chin and then strange bright spots that draw your eye away from her face- the arm and then some very bright grass. her right cheek is way too bright and her hair suddenly changes color. in fact, i can't figure out where the light is coming from. did you lighten up parts of it on post maybe? would have been nice to get some light in her eyes.

[SusanH1970]

I'm not really big on the processing, but I think this shot may have some potential. Can you show a SOOC?

[RLucas]

This photo has great potential. If it were mine, I would kill the heavy vignette, and desaturate the yellows, and oranges a bit to get the detail back in her shirt.
She is squinting a little, but not bad. Full sun is tough to shoot in.