Playing With Light [:

[SandyZaki]

hey all

i've been really into portrait photography and its lighting recently so
I've posted a few portrait pictures (the flickr link) and i'd appreciate some constructive critisism
tell me how you think i could improve
thanks for the feedback!


Camera: Nikon D60
ISO - 100
Shutter Speed - 1/60
Aperture - f/5.6

http://www.flickr.com/photos/sandyevermore/4940124805/

[SusanH1970]

Welcome to DPS! I think this thread may help you post for critique.

[SandyZaki]

Thank you!

[SusanH1970]

Originally Posted by SandyZaki

Thank you!

You're welcome.

Originally Posted by SandyZaki

(sorry im not sure how to post the photos on here)

On the Flickr photo page, click on "Share this", then on "Grab the HTML/BBC code". The default is set to the medium size which is perfect for here. Just copy the code and paste it into your thread. HTH.

ETA: I see you figured it out!

[SusanH1970]

It seems a bit dark/underexposed, and her hair is just blending into the background. What sort of lighting did you use?

I don't often like these types of compositions, but in this case I think it works well.

[cherrygirl]

I think it is a little flat....seems like you hit her with an on camera flash and I think the ligthing needs to be to the side to give it a dramatic light.

[SusanH1970]

Originally Posted by cherrygirl

I think it is a little flat....seems like you hit her with an on camera flash and I think the ligthing needs to be to the side to give it a dramatic light.

+1. I checked your info on Flickr and indeed the flash fired. Direct flash really is never a great idea. Do you have off-camera flash capabilities, or are you using the popup?

[SandyZaki]

Yeah, i use the popup on my camera, although i wana buy a new one for my nikon
but im not really an expert and im not sure of the differences (any suggestions?)
and the lights in the room were on but i edited the background to be darker
and i see what you mean about it being flat, if i had a light source from a diagonal angle at the bottom coming upwards on her face, it wouldve been better
but another problem of mine is im struggling to adjust my settings on my camera to be able to take pictures in dim light without the result being automatically lighter and poor quality (if my description is confusing you, do let me know )

[cherrygirl]

My opinion is to learn all about your camera and how to set it in manual for different lighting situations before jumping off to do real "artsy" dramatic stuff.

Also, without another light source, you are not going to get the results you want. Using is pop up is just not a good idea....especially to do photos like you are trying to do.

You seem to have a good eye, you just need to get the right equipment!