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Old 01-01-2011, 04:03 PM
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Im new to the world of photography and would like a few opioions on this picture i took. Thanks!



Camera Model: Nikon D40X
F-Stop: f/3.5
Exposure Time: 1/30 sec.
ISO Speed: ISO-450
Focal Length: 18mm

I hope this is all the information needed. Thanks in advance!
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Old 01-01-2011, 04:30 PM
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She's very cute. And I love those big eyes. However, your photo has some serious camer-shake issues. You might want to use a tripod next time. And make sure your focus is on the eyes. It looks like it fell on the collar of her sweater in this one. Welcome to photography!
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Old 01-01-2011, 05:20 PM
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Actually, it looks more like a misfocus than camera shake. Shake would be apparent in the whole image. Since the collar of her sweater is sharp, I would say the focus point was in the wrong spot. At 18mm, 1/30 should be enough to hand hold. How much of this photo is cropped out?
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Old 01-01-2011, 07:58 PM
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Agreed, it´s an issue of bad focal point and slow shutterspeed. Try to get your shutter speed at least 1/60th of a second and ensure you lock focus on her face and you´ll be on your way.
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