all play and no sleep for her

[tyasa81]

hi all, i posted this in sys and think it might deserve a critique... was trying a really low light shot and additionally i've noticed those stars that the toy create and always wanted to take a picture of it somehow... this is the best one so far (most interesting angle i've gotten)...

subject is centered because i had to use af assist (only works in center afs) and no use manual focusing since she's moving all the time and i can't see well enough through the vf... aperture and iso is maxed out for what it's worth to be able to hand hold this... room light is off because the toy really shines in total darkness otherwise we can hardly see it on the wall...

critique on composition.. or what would you do differently? there's no crop on the pict as yet...


Exposure 0.077 sec (1/13)
Aperture f/1.4
Focal Length 24 mm
ISO Speed 6400

[OK_to_Point]

I think it is very nice and interesting. It is unusual and I know how hard it is to get good shots of a young one. I have a 2 year old grandson. Take alot of different shots, you never know when you're going to get a really great photo. I think it looks fine just the way it is...........

[tyasa81]

Hi thanx for your critique... i've moved all my critique request to the family photojournalist thread (family photojournalist?)... if you can please take a look an offer an insight... i'll appreciate it very much thank you...