I just love this face

[edmm66]

Very new to photography please help any advice for improvement . This photo was taken on November 10, 2010 using a Fujifilm FinePix S1800..

[Amira]

My first response, as I am obsessed with eyes in portraits, is to point out that the focus on the eyes seems too soft. This could be a matter of opinion, though. Some people prefer a soft focus. I, on the other hand, think the eyes should be sharp and clear. Where was your focus when you took the picture?

I love his personality though, and the mustache is his best feature IMHO.

[kasiakoz]

I have to agree. I love it but just wish it was sharper in focus!

[windrider86]

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[augiecrazy8]

Couple of things. First I agree with a few others that it could be a bit sharper, especially the eyes. I also don't particularly like the framing. I would like to see more of his hat, less of his chest, might be a personal thing but I feel that his hat adds to his personality. Lastly the background. The foliage is a bit distracting, get that outta there and I think you're on to something. I love portraits like these, you just know there are soooo many stories this guy can tell you.

[aprillove20]

Well, it could be a bit sharper.

[Tamster]

I see the focus issue with the eyes also, personal preference as well. Just curious, where should the focus points have been to try to get the eyes in direct focus?

[edmm66]

thank you all for your feedback I am not too sure what I am doing yet but hope to improve.The focus comments are helpful, will try a tripod to cut down on movement or maybe a beanbag and will try to gain some insight on where to focus on the face to get a good shot.Here's to improving each time a I take a picture.

[TBrown00]

Originally Posted by Tamster

I see the focus issue with the eyes also, personal preference as well. Just curious, where should the focus points have been to try to get the eyes in direct focus?

Ideally, one of the focus points would be placed on one of the eyes using single point selection