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Old 11-16-2010, 07:16 PM
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In my efforts to learn everything there is about photography, yes I have a LONG way to go, I make my daughter be my model. I took this over the weekend and I like it. I want to know how everyone feels about it. What would I have done better composition wise? Overall if there is anything that would have made it better? I know the pose is not very posed but to know my daughter this captures her personalities so WELL. She never takes posed shots well she likes to make them her own. Anyway anything you can offer will be greatly appreicated


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Old 11-16-2010, 07:38 PM
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it's a great portrait but I think you're ruining it with the vignetting.
look at the background and see how it destroys it.
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Old 11-16-2010, 10:13 PM
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Thanks !!! You I thought it needed something but I also thought that was kinda dark. Thanks alot
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Old 11-16-2010, 10:31 PM
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It a nice portrait, but it also looks a little cool. Try warming it up a bit, it will really help!
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Thank you I will play around with that. There is so much to learn and it is nice to be able to learn alot of it here )
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