Pictures of my little sister

[Melinakitty13]

Camera Fujifilm FinePix S5Pro with Nikon lens
Exposure 0.017 sec (1/60)
Aperture f/4.5
Focal Length 105 mm
ISO Speed 800


I'm still pretty new at this so if you have any suggestions on the picture please let me know

[MrJones]

Hi,
according to the forum rules, you will need to choose one photo and provide EXIF data for us to help you.
Critique Forum Rules

[Melinakitty13]

Thank you i will fix it.

[kristenh]

i really like it and think it makes a nice b and w. only thing that bothers me is the hat- at first ic ouldn't figure out what it was- then i realized, and i wondered if it's a critical part of the photo or not. i'm scrolling up and down, up and down, to see if i like it better cropped out. not sure. have you tried that? maybe a square crop?

you're kind of breaking the ROT but it seems okay to me. curious what others will think

[MrJones]

I've looked and looked at it, trying to see how I feel about it and here it goes.
I think you've missed something here as you zoomed in too much. what we have here is half a head which normally I wouldn't mind that much if it took almost all of the photo but in this case we have half a head and a fraction of what I think it a guitar(?).
what I'm trying to say here is that we got a fraction of everything but it just doesn't add up in a good way.

[Melinakitty13]

thank you for giving me advice about the picture!

and yes it is a guitar. i have other pictures that are zoomed out a bit more so you can actually tell its a guitar haha

but i have always loved close ups so thats why i choose this one.

here's a link to the other pictures if you are interested...

DSCF1758 | Flickr - Photo Sharing!