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May be good to set a light from behind your daughter, i'm not all good with lighting myself so that's something i would do haha.
I like this, only thing is that teddy, keeps taking my eye away, maybe blurring that could help? Change the aperture maybe. |
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one newbie to another newbie- my best advice is to take her outside. take your photos on a cloudy day or in light, consistent, shade- so you have plenty of nice soft light, don't need to worry about weird shadows, and can use a pretty fast shutter speed so she doesn't move and blur. or place her right near a big window that's bright but w/o direct sunlight. open your aperture wide and possibly bump up your ISO (indoors by the window, that is) and she'll look so much softer and nicer.
looks like you used a flash here, judging by the shadow behind her shoulder, and it is really easy to wash a baby out and get ugly shadows when you use a flash. especially when you are close in like this. also, a couple things that make portraits look really great- catching some light in her eyes-try to entice her to look up a bit or have some lighting coming from behind the camera. it makes a big difference. also, i know you didn't ask about this- but unless its a head and shoulders shot- try not to cut off her hands. looks odd, plus baby hands are so cute ![]() its a nice first try, though- looks like you were good about moving in close and avoiding distractions in the background. |
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Please take a peek at the guidelines for information you're missing in your post. It helps a great deal to know certain information. Such as your exif information. Knowing your camera settings can play a HUGE part in offering you a good critique. Let me know if you need help finding it.
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