A Lonely Day

[breezy93]

Okay, so I took this photo about a month ago and I wanted to evoke a feeling of loneliness. Sort of like an abandoned town feeling, if that makes any sense. I took it around 12:30 in the afternoon, so I was catching some pretty annoying shadows in the shot. I also had to crop out the sides a bit because some random person got in the way. /:

Other than that, I wanted to know if my composition/lighting/idea was okay. I also wanted to hear some suggestions on what I could do with this picture to make it more interesting in terms of editing, etc.

Camera: Kodak EasyShare C743

[MrJones]

it's a great shot but I would crop it as landscape and get rid of some of the blur at the bottom, I think it's a bit distracting and ruins the framing you've got there.
plus, I would add contrast cause it feels a bit flash.
I took the liberty of editing and cropping it to show you what I mean (if it bothers you, let me know and I'll take it down).
btw, I love the framing of the building and the blurry road closing at the bottom, great work!
can you please post your EXIF and the lens that you used?

[breezy93]

Wow. Thanks. Your additions really made my photo better. I'm not sure what you mean by exif and lens though. /:

I'm sorry. I'm really beginner at this.

[marline]

great idea for composition.I love the work that Mr.Jones did on the photo though.A great finish to a wonderful start