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Old 10-27-2010, 08:09 PM
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So it's not a perfect shot but I still wouldn't mind hearing what people think of this.

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morganna tracks

Shutter Speed:1/100 second
Aperture:F/6.3
Focal Length:70 mm
ISO Speed:400
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Old 10-27-2010, 08:26 PM
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honestly? I think the model is in the way of a really great and interesting picture.
my eyes keep going toward the sun and the model just feels in the way.
I mean, she just sits there, feels out of focus a bit and too small to actually capture any details about her.
maybe if she laid on the left edge or on the railway so she would be "on track" with the genera composition of the photo (connecting lines).
btw, I think you'll get a much interesting photo if you we're lower and the camera was almost standing on the left edge.
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