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I am looking for any information that anyone can offer that will tell me what I could have done better. This was during a break when photographing my friends daughters and one decided to be silly. I sharpened the eyes and tweaked the contrast in gimp. I am not to good with PP yet so just minor tweaks. Thanks for taking the time to look


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Old 10-26-2010, 04:34 AM
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really cute picture. nice framing and composition. its underexposed however...needs a bump in curves, and a bump in contrast and a little boost to the vibrance..other than that you could clean up the errant hairs on her brow, but i wouldnt bother... very sweet.
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The skin on her forearm and hand look like they're a different color than the skin on her shoulders/face. She must have had a weird tan.
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Wow I did not notice that but tomorrow I shall look at her arms and see...........that is weird.......
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really cute picture. nice framing and composition. its underexposed however...needs a bump in curves, and a bump in contrast and a little boost to the vibrance..other than that you could clean up the errant hairs on her brow, but i wouldnt bother... very sweet.
This, plus it is too cool. Look at the whites of her eyes. They are light blue. I love funny shots like this.
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