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Old 10-21-2010, 09:04 PM
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Hi all ! I haven't been on here for a while but i'm finally back.
This is a photo I took of a friend in the park.What do you think about it? give me your opinions please.It would be greatly appreciated
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Old 10-22-2010, 09:22 AM
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Hello Marline,

Please provide EXIF data so that we can help you better.
As for the crop, I'd had left more space at the left side. I find that her right foot is too close to the picture border.

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Old 10-22-2010, 05:52 PM
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Thanks for the advice Aleix.As for the EXIF data i will post it sorry about that
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Old 10-22-2010, 05:58 PM
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ISO 64? If its 6400 i really don't see the noise?. Generally ISO should be as low as possible shooting outdoors in good lighting.
Anyways if you want the subject to stand out... lower your f/stop number if your camera allows you to.
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ISO 64? If its 6400 i really don't see the noise?. Generally ISO should be as low as possible shooting outdoors in good lighting.
Anyways if you want the subject to stand out... lower your f/stop number if your camera allows you to.
I think it's actually 64, not 6400.
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I think it's actually 64, not 6400.
really? i thought it went down to only 100. Well im still new so learn new things everyday
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ISO 64? If its 6400 i really don't see the noise?. Generally ISO should be as low as possible shooting outdoors in good lighting.
Anyways if you want the subject to stand out... lower your f/stop number if your camera allows you to.
some cameras have that weird ISO of 64. yes, I know - it's weird.
as for the photo, it doesn't seem sharp, I'm guessing it's because of the 1/70 shutter speed which is slow. you could have bumped up the ISO to 200 or 400 and used a much faster shutter speed (about 1/200).
another thing is the pose. she looks like she holding the bench to keep her from falling which can't send a relaxed message you normally want. if you were going for that scared pose and feeling - forget what I said.
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some cameras have that weird ISO of 64. yes, I know - it's weird.
as for the photo, it doesn't seem sharp, I'm guessing it's because of the 1/70 shutter speed which is slow. you could have bumped up the ISO to 200 or 400 and used a much faster shutter speed (about 1/200).
another thing is the pose. she looks like she holding the bench to keep her from falling which can't send a relaxed message you normally want. if you were going for that scared pose and feeling - forget what I said.
LOL
Marline... its really important to make people feel and look as comfortable as possible. If a pose isn't working out or looks too posey or uncomfortable... that awkwardness WILL show in the pics.
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Old 10-22-2010, 09:09 PM
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oh my!!! Thanks for the pointer sabrina.The pose...she didn't seem scared when the photo was being taken.lol alright maybe she does look a bit scared.I'll work on it next time.'Make the subject look comfortable' yep
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