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Old 10-20-2010, 02:00 AM
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This was one of my favorites from my shoot on Sunday w/ the reluctant teenager.... He made me work for it... this is probably 1 of 4 with him smiling, and maybe 1 of 2 of him looking at the camera. Haven't heard from Mom yet to find out if they're happy with them.

How is the lighting? The crop? The composition? Thanks...any feedback is welcome.

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Camera Pentax K10D
Exposure 0.001 sec (1/750)
Aperture f/4.0
Focal Length 50 mm
ISO Speed 200
Exposure Bias 0 EV
Flash Off, Did not fire
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I like it! He looks like a character. Only think I can say is maybe a crop above the crotch? Kind of a spread eagle shot. LOL!
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Old 10-20-2010, 03:32 PM
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Thanks for the feedback... I tend to agree... I'll try the crop again. I was trying to keep the proportions the same, and was concerned I'd cut off part of the elbows/arms if I brought it up a bit...
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