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Only problem I see so far is that the bricks aren't straight. This could be corrected.


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Old 10-16-2010, 08:38 PM
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maybe a little bit more contrast (just personal preference), and composition-wise i think it would have been nicer to see her just a tad to the left a bit more. and yeah, straighten out the bricks ^_^
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This is a really cool shot! I like it a lot!
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I don't mind the wall as much as I do the underexposure. There is no texture in her skirt becuase it has been completely clipped to solid black. It is very distracting in my opinion. It looks as if it is cutting the model in half.
Other than that, the pose works well, and it is well composed.
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I don't mind the wall as much as I do the underexposure. There is no texture in her skirt becuase it has been completely clipped to solid black. It is very distracting in my opinion. It looks as if it is cutting the model in half.
Other than that, the pose works well, and it is well composed.
Good point. I never really noticed that. I just checked and the shot Straight out of the camera did not have the blacks clipped like that!

I am going to work some magic and simply drop the skirt from the original image into the edited version... It may take some time

edit: Just looked into it actually, and it's because I adjusted the contrast soooooooooo much. I will post an updated version asap.
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