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Old 10-12-2010, 06:03 AM
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I caught this shot with my daughter looking out the sliding glass door in our living room. I know her eyes are not in focus, but I read somewhere that rules are more like "guidelines". I broke this rule on purpose, and was wondering if it works. Also anything else about the shot would be much appreciated! Thanks.

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Old 10-12-2010, 05:39 PM
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It sorta works, but not quite...

Why?

IMO, if I look at a photo I notice that my eyes are drawn to the light parts first, then to the dark parts after, by looking at your photo the first thing I see is the blurred eyes, then I see the sharp hair by the ears, which I think has nice texture, the overall composition is good, though.

But frankly, I would prefer it if the eyes were sharp, why? try squinting and look at the photo
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Old 10-12-2010, 09:52 PM
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It sorta works, but not quite...

Why?

IMO, if I look at a photo I notice that my eyes are drawn to the light parts first, then to the dark parts after, by looking at your photo the first thing I see is the blurred eyes, then I see the sharp hair by the ears, which I think has nice texture, the overall composition is good, though.

But frankly, I would prefer it if the eyes were sharp, why? try squinting and look at the photo
I agree. I'm drawn to the face first and with it being out of focus it's a little distracting. I do like the textures and treatment, though.
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