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Old 10-12-2010, 05:05 AM
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Hello, I've recently done a photoshoot with a candid. I would like some advice on overall composition and lighting of the shots. Thanks!



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Old 10-12-2010, 07:42 AM
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I love everything about this photo, the compsition is good, the colors are great.
the only thing that bothers me is that motion blur that was caused by the shakes of your hand.
please post EXIF data so we can help you better.
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Old 10-12-2010, 03:21 PM
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I love the lighting, very soft and smooth.
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Old 10-12-2010, 03:34 PM
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Wonderful photo!

The thing that caught my eye is how her right breast covers/distorts the forearm. Makes it look a bit odd to me.

Terrific shot!
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Old 10-12-2010, 05:27 PM
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Eh?
What a weird hand gesture...
thumb between middle and ring finger?
first time to see that
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