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Old 10-11-2010, 04:59 AM
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I am looking for any critque you can offer me on this photo. I am studying photography and just decided the other day to photograph my best friends grandbaby to see how well i did. This one stood out to me because of the expression on her cute little face.......


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Old 10-11-2010, 07:37 AM
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what a cute photo and expression!
a couple of things though, her face seems a bit underexposed and I think the focus fell on her hand and not her eyes.
try sharpenning her eyes a bit.
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i like it- very cute. agree with mr. j on the focus and slight underexposure. i'd also consider cropping it at her waist b/c her toes are cut off- maybe if you did a square crop.
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Thanks Babies are a tough one they don't like to sit still and look cute lol
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Thanks Babies are a tough one they don't like to sit still and look cute lol
yup, i've got hundreds, perhaps thousands, of photos that attest to that! wait till she starts walking
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