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Old 10-10-2010, 06:56 PM
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Did some editing, added some warmth and tried to fix the bright spot in the background. What more can I do with it? Should I crop it down?
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Old 10-11-2010, 07:53 PM
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It's a nice picture. I think it could definitely be cropped, and it seems a bit dull to me. Maybe try boosting saturation or contrast? I like the pose though, and she's very pretty. Well done.

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I would try adjusting the curves. It has some great colors, but things look a little flat. You could crop some off of the top and bottom, but I wouldn't do that unless I had to in order to get a certain print size. Good shot!
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Old 10-13-2010, 12:34 PM
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Nice shot ! I would crop it a little only because I also find the sunny background slightly distracting.
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Old 10-13-2010, 03:31 PM
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Great exposure! I checked your EXIF on Flickr and saw you're using Elements 8, so therefore you don't have curves. Try doing a levels adjustment layer and bring the black slider to the right just a touch to add some contrast. Also instead of cropping out that lovely background, I'd use the burn tool set as a fairly big, soft brush at 10% and burn the highlights and midtones of the background to make her pop against it.
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