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Old 09-27-2010, 04:25 AM
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this is my first edited picture, really looking forward to hear your comments!
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Old 09-27-2010, 06:37 AM
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Hi Luis,
please provide your EXIF data as well, it will help us understand how you were shooting it.

two things did catch my eye right from the start:
1. the horizon is not straight.
2. the photo is badly out of focus.

other than that you have his feet toes coming out of his albow which is a bit weird
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Old 09-27-2010, 01:20 PM
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Hi Luis,
please provide your EXIF data as well, it will help us understand how you were shooting it.

two things did catch my eye right from the start:
1. the horizon is not straight.
2. the photo is badly out of focus.

other than that you have his feet toes coming out of his albow which is a bit weird
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You really want the eyes in focus
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Old 10-01-2010, 03:45 AM
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Hi Luis,
please provide your EXIF data as well, it will help us understand how you were shooting it.

two things did catch my eye right from the start:
1. the horizon is not straight.
2. the photo is badly out of focus.

other than that you have his feet toes coming out of his albow which is a bit weird
i took the picture wit a nikon D3000, the aperture was f/11, the shuter speed was 1/100, and i used a 18-55mm lens.

based on what you told me, i worked on it a little bit, let me know what you think.
thanks!
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