A portrait of Sara Osburn

[eleazarparadise]

I'm looking for any critique you can offer. I'm starting to feel that any new work is better than the last assignment. I want to get better but I need your help.

This is Sara Osburn a radio personality from Austin Texas.



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[olive]

I am new... so I don't know that I actually count... but, I like it. She looks very comfortable in your composition.

[MrJones]

I like it. it's a good photo.
the only thing you can improve is taking out that black ellipse on the left top corner.

[highlydope]

Very nice photo! I offer just a couple of small changes below. I warmed it slightly with a photo filter, adjusted the back of her shirt to be a bit more flattering, and pumped up the whites of her eyes and teeth slightly. I'm sure Sara will be happy with the shot whether or not you include any of this!

[eleazarparadise]

Olive - She felt happier and more relaxed in sitting poses. If a future client seems uneasy in standing poses have her sit down.

Mr. Jones - I like your idea. I wish the ground behind her had nothing so that it would look like a seemless backdrop.

Highlydope - Nice edit my friend. Your changes were very subtle, I liked them. Thanks.