Sunset Piggy Back

[voltageek]

My friends William and Charity got married a couple of weeks ago and this was taken the day after the wedding. In person, they have this playful vibe between the two of them and I wanted to capture that in the image. Does it work in this image? And how the lighting have been better?

Exif
Camera: Canon EOS 7D
Exposure: 0.005 sec (1/200)
Aperture: f/5.6
Focal Length: 50 mm
ISO Speed: 100

Strobist
YN-460 II at 1/4 power in shoot through umbrella held over subjects by VAL

[rubysue]

I'm just a newbie, but here's my 2 cents:

I think the idea is really cute, but both of their arms (especially her right arm) make it look kind of awkward. The lighting on her is beautiful, her face and dress look great. The right side of his face is in shadow, could have used something to brighten that up. I still think it's a shot they will love. Great overall feeling, love the colors, very pretty and fun.

[LenDog]

Originally Posted by voltageek

In person, they have this playful vibe between the two of them and I wanted to capture that in the image. Does it work in this image?

YN-460 II at 1/4 power in shoot through umbrella held over subjects by VAL

It works, great photo. I would not change anything.

PS: Like the "volta" in your user name, historical.
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[Exiztence]

That's an awesome shot man! The lighting on the bride is great, so is the background.
Off to fav it on Flickr

[candleman]

pretty darn good.
if the Groom was laughing or smiling more it would be perfect.

it looks like he's complaining about something.. other than that.. good job.